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Once upon a time, in a faraway land called Greenhaven, there lived a pack of werewolves.  Their numbers were many and their lives were prosperous, despite the human settlements that had sprouted up in the valley beneath.  The woods were their refuge and the mountains their home.  Among these werewolves was one family in particular.  It wasn’t a very extraordinary one—more like any other.  It had seven children, all sons, and a mother and father.  Two of these children were grown to manhood already, and were looking throughout the pack and the surrounding area for women to take as mates.

It was a fine summer day when the younger of the two grown sons stumbled upon a beautiful woman.  Her hair was as shiny as dark silk, and her voice as melodious as the birds in the trees.  He felt himself instantly entranced with this mysterious lady, who, she said, came from a faraway land where her family had been hunted to extinction.  She was seeking a place of safety, she said, somewhere to start over.  Henrik, being the poor smitten young man that he was, took her home with him to meet his parents and the rest of the pack.

As they approached the den, the man’s mother’s eyes narrowed in suspicion.  She knew better than to trust beautiful women, being one herself, and sought the council of her grandmother, the pack’s witch woman.  Lilias was an old, wise woman, and at the request of her favorite grandchild she went with her to meet the stranger Henrik had brought home.

The old witch and the young woman, who was called Sarha, faced each other across the short expanse of ground, the elder’s eyes boring into the younger female.  There was something about her…  She leaned into her granddaughter.

“Freya,” she whispered. “That woman will bring this pack nothing but trouble.”

Freya looked at her besotted son and the mysterious woman with growing unease.  Her son’s attention never seemed to leave the girl for long.  Before she could speak to repeat her old granny’s words, Henrik spoke.

“I’d like Sarha for my mate.  I’ve come to bring her to you.  I hope you’ll like her as much as I do.” He managed a smile, but Freya’s gaze upon Sarha quickly dimmed it.  The young girl met the beta female’s eyes defiantly, and Freya took a step forward with a low growl.

“Freya,” Lilias spoke up again, and she turned to look at the old woman. “Don’t.  She’s a witch.”

Silence hung thickly in the air.  Freya stepped back, and Henrik tore his hand from Sarha’s and stared at her in surprise.  The look said it all, though he didn’t speak.  There was nothing to be done about it now, though, in the presence of his mother and great-grandmother.  She spoke quietly to him, and he retook her hand after a few moments.

“You can’t bring her here,” Freya finally said. “The pack doesn’t need another witch.”

“But if she was just my mate…” He shot an imploring glance at Lilias.

“No,” Freya snapped.  She stared at her son, arms folded across her breasts, expecting that to be the end of that.

“I’ll take her to Eiric, then,” he replied calmly, and watched Freya step back as if struck.  He was the shy one, the quiet one, the last one any of them would’ve expected to defy his family.

So he took her away from his mother and great-grandmother to meet the alpha pair.  Eiric initially shrugged her off, but a few whispered words from Lieke had him shaking his head.  They were not so short of women that they couldn’t afford to let one go, and so he refused Sarha admission to their pack.

They walked through the forest as the sun fell down behind the mountains, stopping under a large oak tree.  Henrik was torn.  Here was this beautiful, mysterious woman that had stolen his heart.  In her he saw no flaws, yet she had been completely rejected by his family.  He hadn’t forgotten Lilias’ whispering to Freya, or Lieke’s to Eiric.  A witch woman.  Sarha was a witch woman, something she had neglected to tell him.

The warm pressure of her hand drove those thoughts from his mind, and any suspicion he might have had of her melted when he gazed into her dark eyes.  She was so beautiful, so exquisite, so mysterious, and when she wrapped her arms around his neck and whispered for him to make her his, he couldn’t refuse.  A voice that sounded an awfully lot like his mother whispered in the back of his mind that this was wrong as he slid what clothing she had away from her body and tossed it aside.  Kissing her was like nothing he had ever felt before.

“Take me,” she whispered.  “Take me.”
  

Henrik didn’t need telling twice, and as he pulled her against him the distant rumble of thunder growled across the sky.



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Freya paced back and forth across her grandmother’s den, toying with a necklace that appeared to be made of bones.  She was nude otherwise, and stalked the den like a restless cat.

“It just doesn’t seem like him!” She protested. “To just meet a woman out of the blue and bring her home the next day?  No one falls in love that quick.  And he wasn’t even listening to us, Granny.  Did you see the look on his face?”

“I saw,” Lilias replied from her seated position near the fire.  The old woman’s hands were full of yarn and needles, and she didn’t glance up at her restless granddaughter. “Maybe he’s just at that age.  You remember how you were with your mother.” The old woman’s dark eyes locked with Freya’s blue ones, and it was the younger woman who looked away first.

“That was different,” Freya said, frowning. “I don’t know how but that was different.  Ma and I always fought.  It wasn’t like our spat over mating was anything new.  Henrik…” she trailed off. “I don’t trust it.”

A stroke of lightning split the sky, followed by a growl of thunder.  Both Freya and Lilias turned to see the western horizon edged with dark, rolling clouds.  A chilly wind whipped through the den, bringing the scent of rain.

“Shut that curtain, Freya.” Freya was on her feet before the words had left Lilias’s mouth, drawing an old bit of cloth over the mouth of the old woman’s cave.  She took a seat beside her grandmother and stared at her in silence.

Lilias set her knitting aside and folded her hands in her lap. “You want to know why I told you to reject her,” the old woman remarked. “I can’t tell you the whole reason..but…there is just something about that girl that smells wrong.  I can’t quite explain it.”

“She’s a witch, like you,” Freya said, softly.

“Yes,” Lilias agreed. “A witch with no family and nothing to lose.  A dangerous commodity indeed.”

“Do you think she might be using my son?” Freya’s brows drew together, and it was clear she had thought such herself.

“Perhaps,” Lilias answered. “But it wasn’t malevolence I saw when I looked at her.”

“What was it?”

“Doom,” Lilias murmured, as the lightning flashed again. “Doom for your son and his family.  Our family.”

“My son,” Freya repeated. “My good son.” A finger of cold stabbed into her heart, and it fluttered with panic.  Henrik.  Where was Henrik? “What’s happened?  What’s going to happen?”

“Nothing good…”

“That isn’t helpful!” Freya snarled, agitated. “That’s my son out there, Granny!  Do you think she’s going to do something to him?”

Lilias watched her granddaughter’s temper rise impassively. “I think she already has.”

“Surely there is something we can do?  Fix it…something?”

“If we can get to him, I can try and reverse it,” Lilias said. “Bt we need to find him, and soon.”

The two wolves raced out into the night, one dark, the other mottled grey.  Their howls echoed through the mountains, terrifying human village children and rousing the rest of the pack for the search.  They combed the valley for any signs of the pair, but Henrik and Sarha had vanished without a trace.

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Yay, another werewolf story. This is my first for the 100 Themes Challenge It is #61 fairy tale. Just a fairy tale gone horribly awry. :D Tell me what you think!
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~Pirate-Ninja-Sayuri Sep 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
As always, your writings are brilliant and entertaining. Each word draws you deeper into an engaging story and it is disappointing when you read the last word! Freya and her pack will always be my favorite werewolves.

~Leah
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~ForsakenProdigy Sep 15, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thanks!
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^SparklyDest Sep 14, 2009  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
:eager: THAT was a good read. :nod:
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~ForsakenProdigy Sep 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:D Thanks!
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I really enjoyed reading this. I'm looking forward to part two. <3
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~ForsakenProdigy Sep 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe, excellent. I will start on that tomorrow if I don't have to work.
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